My big brown house. It’s invisible to everyone else, but the only home that I want to see. With its 110 foot driveway, hidden behind the neighbors’, my house contains some of my most cherished things. If one day it burnt down, I wouldn’t know what to do from all of the shock. If I could though, I would take all of the money I could find, a blanket for those cold nights as a hobo, my ipod, my phone, my toothbrush, my hairbrush, and my big black dog. I would take these things, because they all mean something important. If I need to keep up my personal hygiene, or take a nap, I’ll have the things that I need.
By: Kelsie Brown
I love the beginning sentence, it drew me in and it's unique. I love the sentence "It's invisible to everyone else..."
ReplyDeleteI like how you write the ending and the beginning. It read well and very easily and fluently. -Kenna
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kseniya, I really the second sentence.
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